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Category Archives: Writing for the Web

On answering the “why” and “what’s next” component of news stories that the AP says young news consumers want more of: The answers are already there, but paragraphs are a problem

Problem

Often, the who-what-where-when-why-how (and “what’s next”) get blended together in a way that is aesthetically pleasing (in terms of logic, musicality and pacing), but fail to offer easy scannability that Web reading behavior calls for.
As a reader, I have to run my eyes up and down a story to find facts that interest me [...]

Another vote for scannability when writing for the Web

Most recent Alertbox column from Jakob Nielsen, the “King of Usability”:

On the average Web page, users have time to read at most 28% of the words during an average visit; 20% is more likely.

Why I’m interested:

There is still a lot of room for the evolution of how text is presented on a news site, [...]

Mix of short and long articles optimizes engagement with your Web site

Summary: Most users want short, scan-friendly content they can snack upon because it efficiently meets their needs. Occasionally your customers want longer, in-depth pieces. Provide both to optimize site engagement and efficiency.
Source: Jakob Nielsen: “Long vs. short articles as content strategy”
Points of interests:

Informavores consume information in a way that optimizes their benefits relative to the [...]

Writing news for the Web

When writing news for the Web, you must:

Present information in an easily scanned format;
Provide summaries; CNN.com does this well with Story Highlights at the top of its articles;
Recognize that sentence-extending musicality and cognition-consuming cleverness will drive readers to other sites that more efficiently transmit what makes news valuable: new information;
Use independently functioning information [...]